Monday, May 4, 2009
FRIENDS OR LOVERS
KS... I hope you enjoy this because happy ending is never my forte... It was initially another tragic ending till I imagine Madam Hitler with Nazi whip lashing back and forth... and so... erm... I guess I need to comply... Happy ending here I come... Hahaha...
DL: I didn't use any layouting method, just align the paragraph at the center instead of the usual left and start typing... The key is to...
Let the words naturally flow out of the brainstorm
and as they overtake your heart, they will find their own form
Its a concept I learn from your poem when you said to leave hearts on their own
Set them completely free to roam about and let them find their own home
So is the content of this pictorial poem... to be friends or lovers... things will fall into equilibrium, as the demand and supply curve find their point of meet, there... is the point of determination... friends or lovers... only time will tell...
In terms of style I am experimenting with her thoughts and his thoughts - a poem duet... (at the start of the poem) Like a song, a duet poem is read out interchangeably by two readers... and then the poem merges into one single form read by a third person as the author... this actually illustrates the shape of a heart... two separate beginning on top becoming one towards the bottom... enjoy...
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